Before and After Samples

These Before and After samples show how dramatically your learners' writing will improve after attending one of our core workshops. Judging by the subject lines of each set, wouldn't the Afters grab your attention first? For more examples on a variety of topics from various industries, please e-mail us.

Click on a workshop title to see the Before and After.


Reader-Centered Business WritingTM

Subject line of the Before: No subject line

Subject line of the After: Solving your data integration difficulties


Writing for LeadersTM

Subject line of the Before: Quality and Continuous Improvement

Subject line of the After: You can make a difference in Global's future


Energize Your E-mailĀ®

Subject line of the Before: Meeting notes

Subject line of the After: Action steps from our 7/26 mtg.


Write to Win SalesĀ®

Subject line of the Before: No subject line

Subject line of the After: Choosing a financial partner who's right for you


Reader-Centered Technical WritingTM

Subject line of the Before: Frit problem

Subject line of the After: Frit problem solved and fixed

quote In one day I wrote a document in 20 minutes, which previously would have taken over one hour. quote

- Jeff, Key Account Manager, The Gillette Company