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Digital body language in business writing: How do you come across?

  
  
  
  
  
  
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Co-author Diane Bailey-Boulet

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Death by subject line: a cautionary business writing tale

  
  
  
  
  
  

By guest blogger Andrea MacLeod
It’s January and my favorite store’s e-marketing campaign is out of control. I succumbed to several of their “special offers” during the holidays, and now they are targeting my inbox relentlessly. In an attempt to clear the backlog of last season’s merchandise, they are jeopardizing future full-price sales.

Better Communications empowers companies to make written communications a competitive asset–clear writing for a complex world! Check out our monthly online and in-person Open Seminars.

Need a brand-aid? Build your leadership brand in business writing

  
  
  
  
  
  

A new book caught my eye; it’s by Suzanne Bates, a local colleague of mine who is a CEO coach and the bestselling author of Speak Like a CEO. The book, Discover Your CEO Brand: Secrets to Embracing and Maximizing Your Unique Value as a Leader, is an essential resource for any leader or emerging leader who “gets” the power of reputation.

Better Communications empowers companies to make written communications a competitive asset–clear writing for a complex world! Check out our monthly online and in-person Open Seminars.

How to write a highly effective subject line - by Jill Konrath

  
  
  
  
  
  
If you're like most sellers, you don't pay a lot of attention to the subject lines. They're an afterthought. No big deal, right?

Totally wrong. Your subject line is the most important part of your message. If it's not a good one, your email gets trashed in a nanosecond. In fact, research by ExactTarget (my email newsletter service) show that the average person spends only 2.7 seconds on a message before deciding if they'll delete it, forward it or read it.

Just 2.7 seconds. That's all the time you have to capture a readers attention. That's why your subject line is so darn critical.

First, let's talk about what you don't put in a subject line. In order to avoid auto-deletes, it's imperative for you to:
  • Avoid salesy verbiage. Get rid of words like excited, hot new product, free offer or special pricing.
  • Avoid info on your company. No one is interested in your new product announcements or company updates except you.
  • Avoid capital letters. Just the first word should be capped. Otherwise it seems like a headline, not a personal message.
Now, let's talk about what works in your prospecting emails. Here are several options that have proven effective with today's crazy-busy prospects.
  • Use a referral. If someone has referred you to this person, put that in your subject line. They'll want to know why. For example, you might write: Terry Jones said to get in touch.
  • Ask a quick question. If your prospect feels it's simple and relevant, they'll take a look. Your subject line might read: Quick question re: new client acquisition challenges.
  • Tempt with ideas or information. My prospects are always interested in subject lines like this: Idea to reduce your sales cycle time or How XYZ company increased sales to Fortune 500 companies by 127%.
  • Mention a trigger event. If something is happening within the company or in their greater business environment that's relevant to your offering, bring that up. For example, if you read about a recent merger, you might write: Impact of XYZ merger on (insert relevant business issue you address.)
Get the picture? To work, your subject lines must focus on something your prospect cares about. If you do that, they'll keep reading.

Here's a major caveat though. When they start reading your message, it needs to deliver exactly what you promised in your subject line.

If you move into salesy mode or talk about your company, you'll trigger your prospect's auto-delete reaction. They can't control it. And you've lost the opportunity to open the conversation.

Hopefully by now you understand just how critical those simple little subject lines are to your sales success. I'd suggest you sit down right now and create 10 new ones you can use in the upcoming weeks.

Finally, start your experiment. See if you can tell which subject lines are most effective with your prospects. Then create variations off the same theme. You'll immediately see the difference in your sale success.

Jill Konrath, author of SNAP Selling and Selling to Big Companies, helps sellers get more prospects in their pipeline, speed up sales cycles and land bigger contracts. She's a frequent speaker at sales conferences. For more fresh sales strategies that work with crazy-busy prospects, visit www.jillkonrath.com.
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E-mail subject lines that say it all: Write to the Top guidelines

  
  
  
  
  
  
By guest blogger Diane Bailey-Boulet 

Business writing course graduates from an intact team contacted us recently to help set team standards for effective e-mail subject lines. Below are their questions.

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Is your daily business writing TOO business-like?

  
  
  
  
  
  

In e-mail, in the name of being professional, do you tend to shy away from asking your customers about a recent vacation or a sick child?

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Managers report nearly 80% of decision-making takes place in writing

  
  
  
  
  
  

What are the implications for those in leadership roles?

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Getting Down to Business Writing: Start-Up Strategies for Generating and Organizing Ideas

  
  
  
  
  
  

I would be willing to bet that all of us have, at one time or another, put off a project until its deadline loomed large, leaving us feeling frustrated and perhaps even a little panicked. With writing, I’ve found that it is often getting started, and not the actual execution of a document, that is most difficult.

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Leaders need emotional intelligence in e-mail

  
  
  
  
  
  

I came across an article in Chief Learning Officer’s online magazine that shines a spotlight on a critical area: emotional intelligence in e-mail. We think of emotional intelligence as it applies to live human interaction, but today we spend most of our time communicating electronically. This increases the chances that we’ll mess up and offend a reader.

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Communicate to keep your team: business writing for leaders

  
  
  
  
  
  

I came across a new report by Deloitte that is compelling, but not surprising: poor communication is damaging employee morale—and undermining business success. Failing to connect authentically with employees, especially when the chips are down, can cost a company everything from lost business to lost talent.

Better Communications empowers companies to make written communications a competitive asset–clear writing for a complex world! Check out our monthly online and in-person Open Seminars.
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